Essay

Topic: if you could change one important thing about your hometown, what would you change? Use reasons and examples.


If I could change my hometown, I want to make the apartments shorter, I mean that there are lots of apartment, but it is too far to go to top because of the parks, playgrounds, and the stairs. I want to make big supermarket because it is too far to go.
The reason why I want to change the distance is that, it takes too long to go over the friends’ houses, it is hard because it is mountain, it is very clean, more beautiful than other apartments though, lots of people ride bicycles, but because the road is made going up, it is very hard to go, and take too long,
It is very dangerous because of the cars, we can’t really see the car coming from the side, and the parking place, there are walls with ninety degrees of angles, which causes a lot of accident, but there were no accident for last years. Another reason why it is very dangerous is that we have to go down, which makes the speed of bicycle, or skates faster. Also it is very different that people don’t stop, unless they are really nice, different culture. So if we see any cars we have to wait them to stop or let it pass.
It is very far to go to supermarket, the one that is inside of apartment is small, and it still takes long time. If we want to get better ones, or something that small one has, it takes twenty minutes to get, also we have to walk up and down in small space because lots of people go to study, and sidewalk is very small.
Two big things I really want to change because it will be very useful for everyone, to old people, and young people. We can have more fun with friends, and save the time with going supermarkets.